Comments on: LIVE BLOG: OIA banquet https://www.hawaiiprepworld.com/hawaii-sports/live-blog-oia-banquet/ The source for Hawaii's high school sports Sat, 20 Jun 2015 02:30:57 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.1 By: Nick Abramo https://www.hawaiiprepworld.com/hawaii-sports/live-blog-oia-banquet/comment-page-1/#comment-55770 Sat, 20 Jun 2015 02:28:27 +0000 http://www.hawaiiprepworld.com/?p=41977#comment-55770 In reply to punctuation is important.

Thanks for your readership.

I’m going to change it to this, which is clearer:

Farrington AD Harold Tanaka stepped up to the podium before dinner, and, after introducing himself as “Kaiser AD Rodney Iwasaki,” he told the audience that if they had any complaints about the upcoming program, they should look for “Rodney Iwasaki” later.

]]> By: punctuation is important https://www.hawaiiprepworld.com/hawaii-sports/live-blog-oia-banquet/comment-page-1/#comment-55730 Thu, 18 Jun 2015 19:36:45 +0000 http://www.hawaiiprepworld.com/?p=41977#comment-55730 “Farrington AD Harold Tanaka went to the podium for a quick few words before dinnner and introduced himself as Kaiser AD Rodney Iwasaki, his good friend, and told people that he would be available to talk with anyone who wanted to complain.”

So this means that Harold Tanaka stepped up to the podium and said “hello, my name is Rodney Iwasaki, the Kaiser AD,” and then he told people he would be available to talk to with anyone who had complaints?

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